This is the storyboard I have made. My group helped me with ideas and had a previous draft before this which we have no improved on.
Locked Up Final Draft
Production Diary
Day 1 (13th November)- Me, Aaron, James and Harrison all discussed and shared our individual pitches to each other and all decided on the best one to present to the class. We decided to present James' as his had the best story line. After we had presented we then decided a whole new idea which was to do a documentary and James started to plan the prezi for this.
Day 2 (14th November)- Our prezi was created for our documentary and we presented it to the class. Good feedback was given back to us for us to improve and we didn't get much criticism. With the feedback we then made a few changes to our storyline and then was discussed with Miss Brookes.
Day 3 (17th November)- Our group sat together and decided on all the improvements for our final film pitch. We then starting our sources we will be using in the film so Aaron created a newspaper article which will be used in our film. Me, James and Harrison also helped by giving him ideas.
Day 4- (18th November)- Today we began to plan our storyboard, these images show evidence of this.
Day 5 (20th November- Me, Aaron, James and Harrison started blogging for preparation for our film pitch.
Day 6 (21th November) - Aaron, James and Harrison have started to prepare the voice over. I have now completed the storyboard and our group are now filming our storyboard.
Day 7 (25th November)- We have all continued to plan and create our storyboard. Timings for each scene have now also been added and we are now ready to start making the storyboard video.
Day 8 (26th November)- Aaron, James and Harrison filmed the storyboard and also did the voice over for it. James was the voice over for the storyboard and Aaron recorded him. Whilst doing this Harrison was designing the wall for his cabin that we are using in our film.
Day 9 (2nd December)- Today we have continued to blog our progress and will soon be preparing our film as most of our scenes have no been filmed the previous weekend. I have also now uploaded the storyboard film and have given evidence of us planning our work.
Day 10 (4th December)- Today me, Harrison, Aaron and James have continued filming our interviewing at school in the drama studio. We have learnt about lighting and camera angles during this process and we are now starting to edit our film as our first draft.
Day 11 (5th December)- I have started to record the storyboard film and finish filming our last scenes of the film opening. Aaron and James have continued to edit our film and Harrison has helped me with the filming of the storyboard.
Day 12 (8th December)- Today we gave feedback to other groups film drafts and also got our feedback back.
Day 13 (9th December)- We used our feed back to improve on our film draft and i continued to edit our film. Aaron, James and Harrison were blogging whilst I was doing this.
Day 14 (10th December)- We have re-filmed our interview as from our feedback we realised our interview wasn't very good and we have added thing to our film so the interview makes more sense.
Day 15 (11th December)- I continued to edit our film whilst James has gathered videos to be added into it. Harrison has carried on producing the newspaper article which James also helped him with and Aaron has been listing our shooting schedule.
Day 16 (12th December)- We presented our film to Miss and got feedback on it which we used to edit our film in order to improve it. Me and Aaron both edited it whilst James and Harrison did the newspaper article and re-did the voice over.
Day 17 (15th December)- Today is our last day of making our film and we have made the last improvements to our film. Whilst I edited Aaron, James and Harrison continued to blog.
Day 2 (14th November)- Our prezi was created for our documentary and we presented it to the class. Good feedback was given back to us for us to improve and we didn't get much criticism. With the feedback we then made a few changes to our storyline and then was discussed with Miss Brookes.
Day 3 (17th November)- Our group sat together and decided on all the improvements for our final film pitch. We then starting our sources we will be using in the film so Aaron created a newspaper article which will be used in our film. Me, James and Harrison also helped by giving him ideas.
Day 4- (18th November)- Today we began to plan our storyboard, these images show evidence of this.
Day 6 (21th November) - Aaron, James and Harrison have started to prepare the voice over. I have now completed the storyboard and our group are now filming our storyboard.
Day 7 (25th November)- We have all continued to plan and create our storyboard. Timings for each scene have now also been added and we are now ready to start making the storyboard video.
Day 8 (26th November)- Aaron, James and Harrison filmed the storyboard and also did the voice over for it. James was the voice over for the storyboard and Aaron recorded him. Whilst doing this Harrison was designing the wall for his cabin that we are using in our film.
Day 9 (2nd December)- Today we have continued to blog our progress and will soon be preparing our film as most of our scenes have no been filmed the previous weekend. I have also now uploaded the storyboard film and have given evidence of us planning our work.
Day 10 (4th December)- Today me, Harrison, Aaron and James have continued filming our interviewing at school in the drama studio. We have learnt about lighting and camera angles during this process and we are now starting to edit our film as our first draft.
Day 11 (5th December)- I have started to record the storyboard film and finish filming our last scenes of the film opening. Aaron and James have continued to edit our film and Harrison has helped me with the filming of the storyboard.
Day 12 (8th December)- Today we gave feedback to other groups film drafts and also got our feedback back.
Day 13 (9th December)- We used our feed back to improve on our film draft and i continued to edit our film. Aaron, James and Harrison were blogging whilst I was doing this.
Day 14 (10th December)- We have re-filmed our interview as from our feedback we realised our interview wasn't very good and we have added thing to our film so the interview makes more sense.
Day 15 (11th December)- I continued to edit our film whilst James has gathered videos to be added into it. Harrison has carried on producing the newspaper article which James also helped him with and Aaron has been listing our shooting schedule.
Day 16 (12th December)- We presented our film to Miss and got feedback on it which we used to edit our film in order to improve it. Me and Aaron both edited it whilst James and Harrison did the newspaper article and re-did the voice over.
Day 17 (15th December)- Today is our last day of making our film and we have made the last improvements to our film. Whilst I edited Aaron, James and Harrison continued to blog.
Titles Task- The Conjuring
T1: Directed By James Wan
From Start: 17 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T2: Writters
From Start: 24 Seconds
Duration: 3 Seconds
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T3: Producers
From Start: 28 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T4: Executive Producers
From Start: 34 Seconds
Duration: 3 Seconds
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T5: Director Of Photography
From Start: 37 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T6: Production Designer
From Start: 44 Seconds
Duration: 3 Seconds
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T7: Editor
From Start: 48 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T8: Actors
From Start: 1:14 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T9: Actors
From Start: 1:18 Seconds
Duration: 5 Seconds
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T10: Casting
From Start: 1:24 Seconds
Duration: 5 Seconds
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T11:
From Start: 1:29 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T12: Music
From Start: 1:35 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T13: A New Line Cinema Production
From Start: 1:39 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T14:
From Start: 1:45 Seconds
Duration: 3 Seconds
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T15: A James Wan Film
From Start: 1:49 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T16: Title of Film
From Start: 1:56 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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Titles Task- Psycho (1998)
T1:
Universal Pictures and Imagine Entertainment
From Start: 6 Seconds
Duration:
6 Seconds
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T2: Psycho (Title)
From Start: 12 Seconds
Duration: 7 Seconds
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T3: Vince Vaughn
From Start: 21 Seconds
Duration: 3 Seconds
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T4: Starring- Julianne Moore
From Start: 25 Seconds
Duration:
2 Seconds
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T5: Starring- Viggo
Mortensen
From Start: 29 Seconds
Duration:
2 Seconds
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T6: Starring- William
H. Macy
From Start: 33 Seconds
Duration:
3 Seconds
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T7: List of actors
From Start: 39 Seconds
Duration: 6 Seconds
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T8: Anne Heche (Actor)
From Start: 46 Seconds
Duration: 6 Seconds
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T9: Casting- Howard
Feuer
From Start: 52 Seconds
Duration:
3 Seconds
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T10: Music- Bernard Herrmann
From Start: 57 Seconds
Duration:
3 Seconds
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T11:
Music Producers
From Start: 1:02 Seconds
Duration:
3 Seconds
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T12: Beatrix Aruna Pasztor
From Start: 1:07 Seconds
Duration: 2 Seconds
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T13: Editor- Amy E. Duddleston
From Start: 1:12 Seconds
Duration:
2 Seconds
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T14: Production Designer- Tom Foden
From Start: 1:15 Seconds
Duration: 5 Seconds |
T15:
Director of Photography
From Start: 1:22 Seconds
Duration:
3 Seconds
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T16:
Executive Producer- Dany Wolf
From Start: 1:25 Seconds
Duration:
2 Seconds
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T17: Producers
From Start:1:31 Seconds
Duration: 4 Seconds
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T18: Screenplay- Joseph Stefano
From Start: 1:36 Seconds
Duration:
4 Seconds
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T19: Director- Gus Van Sant
From Start: 1:41 Seconds
Duration: 7 Seconds
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The titles in this film opening are all in capitals and have a white, bold font. Many thrillers tend to use capitals and bold writing like this film. The titles are all animated the same on green lines to a black background. The music in the background is very tension building and has the effect of a thriller as the tension shows something scary or strange is going to happen. The use of black, green and white colours shows it isn’t a very uplifting film as they are dim, boring colours, although the use of green shows it as more of a thriller.
Elements of our Opening Sequence
Characters
Sophie
Vale: Interviewer
James
Grimley: Psycho
Aaron
Beard: Neighbour
Harrison:
Kidnapper
Location
Harrison’s
garden and cabin
Drama
Studio
Narrative/Plot
An
interview will take place with a man of 30 who is recovering from living in his
kidnapper’s cabin for 15 years when he was just 15 years old. Throughout this
film opening we will show evidence of the conditions the man lived in and talk
about how the psycho was found. We imagine the man as a psycho because the
conditions he lived in turned him mental.
Genre
Our
genre is a documentary. Although it comes across as a thriller we are showing
the life of the psycho in a documentary and then interviewing them.
Themes
Real
life events
Professional
Voice-Over
Direct
and Indirect Interviews
Reenactment
Film Opening Analysis- Unspoken
I would give this film opening a low level 4 as it only shows some levels of excellence. The titles are used appropriately according to institutional conventions and the editing of the titles have been produced well. Each title blends in well with each scene and has interesting conventions. Also a variety of shots have been used to show key details and sound effects have been used appropriately for example the rustling of the paper in the bag. It is made apparent that the film opening is a mystery/crime and not too much is given away which makes it more interesting.
Film Opening Analysis- The Visitor
I would give this film opening a level 4 as it shows some level of excellence. Titles are used appropriately and the titles are effective make it seem like more of a horror. I also liked the close up shots as it gives the impression that the girl isn't human and may be in fact a spirit. The shots of her fading away also gives this impression. I found this opening interesting because it doesn't give too much away like a trailer and leaves on an interesting cliff hanger which makes you want to watch further. The sound was also good with the whispering in the background which makes it more sinister and scary. The higher volume at the end of the film opening makes it more jumpy. Overall I'd give 55 out of 60 it has shown level 4 criteria.
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